I think my long comment with feedback was lost by me tapping SLIGHTLY off the blue arrow 🤦🏻♀️
In case it's gone, here's the abridged version!
This was fun, and just what I needed today! I would love to see all the tension/chemistry rise a bit more, between all the characters, even the rivalry with Mercy. You've done a good job with pacing, moving the time along. It's such a sunshine story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hehe, next week’s definitely raises the tension! I would love to incorporate Mercy more, but I think that’s gonna be more easily done if/when I turn this into a novel someday. Thank you for your feedback, and as always, for being here!! 🥰
Yay!! Loved this chapter! Things are heating up!
They're slowly starting to boil.....!
I just ABSOLUTELY LOVE this series!! I especially love today's because I have an audition today :)
Oooh, good luck! May Indigo’s good vibes be with you! Thank you so much for reading 🥰
I think my long comment with feedback was lost by me tapping SLIGHTLY off the blue arrow 🤦🏻♀️
In case it's gone, here's the abridged version!
This was fun, and just what I needed today! I would love to see all the tension/chemistry rise a bit more, between all the characters, even the rivalry with Mercy. You've done a good job with pacing, moving the time along. It's such a sunshine story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hehe, next week’s definitely raises the tension! I would love to incorporate Mercy more, but I think that’s gonna be more easily done if/when I turn this into a novel someday. Thank you for your feedback, and as always, for being here!! 🥰
This was so greaaaat I was literally trying not to squeal the whole time!! 😆
Hehe this makes me so happy!