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Kimberly Grace's avatar

I like the premise a lot. I do wish the mystery boy would have interacted a little more with Indie in a way that created a little more tension to start the story, but maybe that’s coming in part 2. I have to say the part about the Cowboys crushing the Eagles hurt me a little inside. I’m from the Philly area, so you got that part reversed. 😉

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EJ's avatar

Loved this!!!! I can't wait to see where it goes......... I'm already cooking up theories 💡 great job!

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